Blog post 13

Yes , the video helped so much. I definitely went back and re did my work cited page. I also cited in my actual paper.  The n.p. is not important because it let's reader know that you were irresponsible and did not your research as closely. The paper will look credited and the citation wouldn't look complete if you  do not add them.

Part 2
The eyes of doctor represents that there is someone watching over the valley of ashes. The eyes know everything that is going on in valley of ashes. The way that eyes are represented looks like it also knows the secret that many people don't know. The valley of ashes represents the the difference between west egg and easy egg. It also shows about two places are very different by that small peace of valley in between. The valley also hides the dark secrets of both eggs and it also represent the mixture of both sides. I don't like myrtle very much because her husband is working his butt off at work and gas station while she is here having fun with Tom and her friends. I don't think this is right and when his husband finds out he will be very mad and there might be some tragedy in future. I think myrtle likes tom very much and tom is trapped in her games Instead! She enjoys her freedom and free stuff very much. Therefore, she keeps on calling toms house because she is scared she might loose him.  They even fought because of daisy. Myrtle is jealous of her because she keeps on talking about her to tom and tom got mad and hit her very hard. But i don't think it was necessary because he could have just explained it to her and she would have stop saying her name. I can see Tom's point of view on this issue. He thought it was important to hit her because she had to know who was the boss and who had the money. He also might respect daisy and don't want anyone saying anything bad about her. I think Nick is just a bystander witnessing everything occurring around hum, He is also willing to help them by keeping the secrets that can mess everything up. He knows too much about the people and I think that is the reason why he is so frustrated and wanted to share these secrets with someone. He just wanted to lessen his guilt of knowing all the secrets and he did that by writing a book.